She’s on that corner again. Stalking from a distance, I listen.
“Good for nothing cougar”, he kicks her. “Costing me money”
I start walking, money in hand. Alone, she hums in her bra and skirt.
My hand touches her smooth, warm body, and I see right through her.
She’s my first ride,
my first car.
Like I said during Peer revision, very suggestive, but it adds that spice of comedy into the mix. Good descriptives. Overall.. interesting, but creative.
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